Monday, August 20, 2012

Deception

Like the moon behind the clouds, about to shine
Hidden under the Arabian black, was the captivating smile.
Look so gentle and charm so pure.
Big brown eyes enough to allure.


Bewitching hair lingering on her forehead,

Looked like a princess wearing golden thread.
Swinging, her, hair sunk the forehead low,
And the mesmerizing eyes, continued to glow.


Wanted to talk I could not utter a word.

Lost all the thoughts for they have gone blurred.
She kept on staring, with the secret smile,
I remained all wondered, puzzled for a while.


Recollected my senses and I started to talk,

Asked her gently – shall we go for a walk?
Maintaining the silence she did not react,
I was still not in senses, soon realized the fact.

Got in control and wondered where am I?

It was only earth; I was not on the sky.
Laughed on myself as I was acting like a freak,
There were no answers for the pictures do not speak.



Theme credit to 'Sneha Lalwani' !

28 comments:

  1. Sahi jaa rahe ho miyaan ... Nicely written ... This words made me to search for Sneha Lalwani on facebook, and this lines truely describe that pic.
    -Good job Pawan
    P.S. Mere profile pic pe bhi ek-do line to banti hai dost. :P

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    1. Thank u Thank u!

      aur ek do line kyon poora chittha kholte hain kisi din ;)

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  2. :-) nice one dude.
    She should surely haven been on cloud 9 by now ;-)

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  3. :-) nice one dude.
    She should surely haven been on cloud 9 by now ;-)

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    1. Thanks!! .. but I cant identify you by the display name :)

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  4. Absolutely mesmerising...and suits Sneha as well.....true dedication like a pure artist..like ur style... keep it up...

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    1. Thank u!! appreciate you feedback as always :)

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  5. nice thoughts.. and the theme... :D :D

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  6. Lovely piece of art Pawan...
    Is this meant for someone specific? I refer to the romantic part... :)

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    1. Thanks Afik ...really nice to see you here :)
      and I tried to write on the situation of a person talking to a painting which is so realistic that made him loose senses for a while !

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  7. this is really Nice yaar, sahi ja raha he!!!!!!!!!!

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  8. Didn't know Buddy, there was a Poet inside you... really mesmerizing words...

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  9. Pawan,

    bahot mast likha hai dude ... :)
    really liked it !!!!!

    Shayad ban gaya hai tu
    ;)

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  10. very nice!!
    deep and romantic thoughts..

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  11. Cool man .. :) u should keep writing dude..:)

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