Like the moon behind the clouds, about to shine
Hidden under the Arabian black, was the captivating smile.
Look so gentle and charm so pure.
Big brown eyes enough to allure.
Bewitching hair lingering on her forehead,
Looked like a princess wearing golden thread.
Swinging, her, hair sunk the forehead low,
And the mesmerizing eyes, continued to glow.
Wanted to talk I could not utter a word.
Lost all the thoughts for they have gone blurred.
She kept on staring, with the secret smile,
I remained all wondered, puzzled for a while.
Recollected my senses and I started to talk,
Asked her gently – shall we go for a walk?
Maintaining the silence she did not react,
I was still not in senses, soon realized the fact.
Got in control and wondered where am I?
It was only earth; I was not on the sky.
Laughed on myself as I was acting like a freak,
There were no answers for the pictures do not speak.
Theme credit to 'Sneha Lalwani' !
Hidden under the Arabian black, was the captivating smile.
Look so gentle and charm so pure.
Big brown eyes enough to allure.
Bewitching hair lingering on her forehead,
Looked like a princess wearing golden thread.
Swinging, her, hair sunk the forehead low,
And the mesmerizing eyes, continued to glow.
Wanted to talk I could not utter a word.
Lost all the thoughts for they have gone blurred.
She kept on staring, with the secret smile,
I remained all wondered, puzzled for a while.
Recollected my senses and I started to talk,
Asked her gently – shall we go for a walk?
Maintaining the silence she did not react,
I was still not in senses, soon realized the fact.
Got in control and wondered where am I?
It was only earth; I was not on the sky.
Laughed on myself as I was acting like a freak,
There were no answers for the pictures do not speak.
Theme credit to 'Sneha Lalwani' !
beautifully woven words!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sneha!
ReplyDeletesimply "wow"
ReplyDeleteThanks !
DeleteSahi jaa rahe ho miyaan ... Nicely written ... This words made me to search for Sneha Lalwani on facebook, and this lines truely describe that pic.
ReplyDelete-Good job Pawan
P.S. Mere profile pic pe bhi ek-do line to banti hai dost. :P
Thank u Thank u!
Deleteaur ek do line kyon poora chittha kholte hain kisi din ;)
:-) nice one dude.
ReplyDeleteShe should surely haven been on cloud 9 by now ;-)
:-) nice one dude.
ReplyDeleteShe should surely haven been on cloud 9 by now ;-)
Thanks!! .. but I cant identify you by the display name :)
DeleteAbsolutely mesmerising...and suits Sneha as well.....true dedication like a pure artist..like ur style... keep it up...
ReplyDeleteThank u!! appreciate you feedback as always :)
Deletenice thoughts.. and the theme... :D :D
ReplyDeleteThanks ! ;)
Deletewah ... subhanallah ... :)
ReplyDeleteLovely piece of art Pawan...
ReplyDeleteIs this meant for someone specific? I refer to the romantic part... :)
Thanks Afik ...really nice to see you here :)
Deleteand I tried to write on the situation of a person talking to a painting which is so realistic that made him loose senses for a while !
this is really Nice yaar, sahi ja raha he!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletethanks dost !
DeleteDidn't know Buddy, there was a Poet inside you... really mesmerizing words...
ReplyDeletethanks :)
Deletemast likha hai saale :D
ReplyDeletethanks Kaminey :D
DeleteNice... Din tell u r a poet :)
DeletePawan,
ReplyDeletebahot mast likha hai dude ... :)
really liked it !!!!!
Shayad ban gaya hai tu
;)
Thank u thank u :)
Deletevery nice!!
ReplyDeletedeep and romantic thoughts..
thanks brother !
DeleteCool man .. :) u should keep writing dude..:)
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