Friday, May 17, 2013

Midnight charm !





 


















 Looking at the stars, staring at the moon,
Beauty of the darkness, seven stars spoon.

Things in harmony, twinkles adorning the sky,
Moon behind the clouds, being a little shy.

Waves of the ocean, giggling in delight,
Quiet, calm sand relishing dim moon light.

A sudden gentle breeze came, riding on waves,
It felt paradise when it touched my face.

With the passing moments the clouds have got dispersed,
In the unveiled, full moon, I see beauty of beloved.

Overwhelmed by the simplicity, I sat for a long,
Kept enjoying the moments, till time it is dawn.

With the aging darkness, appears mist shower,
I walk back home, wondering,
Life, indeed, has so much to offer !



~Pawan
18/05/13



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  1. UnknownMay 18, 2013 at 1:55 AM

    Awesome...

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  2. AnonymousMay 18, 2013 at 2:34 AM

    Brilliant! :)

    There is an exercise you can do to feel this effect. Whenever it is windy, spread out your arms and just feel will the wind. Close your eyes and let it hit your face. Feel the magic and let it carry you off to far off places. The feeling is eternal and magical.

    Hold it for a minute.

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    1. Pawan GMay 18, 2013 at 2:51 AM

      this is really blissful feel. I experience it often :)

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  3. manish agrawalMay 18, 2013 at 4:15 AM

    Very Nice...!

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  4. KDMay 18, 2013 at 5:16 AM

    O bete...its real brilliance... You r getting better bhaai. My favourite Line Was "I walk back home, wondering,
    Life, indeed, has so much to offer !"

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    1. Pawan GMay 18, 2013 at 5:20 AM

      Thanks bhai ... and to be honest, it's my favorite line too!

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  5. Ravi BhojwaniMay 19, 2013 at 11:47 AM

    good one bro...

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  6. AnonymousMay 19, 2013 at 11:05 PM

    This is great stuff. But just one thing. Do not limit your thinking by the need to rhyme.

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  7. Neha ChandraMay 20, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    Simple..short and sweet :)

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  8. Sunil AwnaniMay 21, 2013 at 6:47 AM

    thats gr8 buddy....

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  9. DibyenduMay 22, 2013 at 1:49 AM

    Pretty!! :)

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  10. AnonymousJune 13, 2013 at 4:10 AM

    Simple, Short and Expressive!!!

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  11. AnonymousAugust 9, 2013 at 3:21 AM

    Awesome Bhai... mast likha hai.... :)

    Aarri

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  12. UnknownJuly 10, 2014 at 11:27 PM

    i m speechless...no wrds to praise these bful wrds...

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  13. AditiApril 1, 2015 at 11:09 AM

    This one is so much in contrast to 'Far Away' poem !

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